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This is the first time I'm actually giving a piece of my work to a possible big crowd... anyway, give me tips, feedback, and please, maybe just a little bit of encouragement? thanks a million, my fellow beans :)

Moon Reflection

The moon dips into the quivering pond,

Sending ripples out near the leafy fronds,

Yet I see the moon in the sky,

As usual, so bright and luminous yet shy,

Hiding behind a cloud now,

Coming out to take a peek.

The moon sees her own reflection,

And stares at her silver complexion.